TEACHER ASSESSMENT OF RESEARCH (Individual Draft 2)

TEACHER ASSESSMENT OF RESEARCH (Individual Draft 2)

I have sat down with my teacher 1-to-1 and she gave me some feedback on the quality of my research of my chosen topics:

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interesting points  good facts about topic mentioning the views of different countries (global)	have equal amount of research for both topics  use other research methods   don't base it too much on history  mention changes  how is this topic seen nowadays basic information

Overall, she gave me a grade of E2.  My target grade is D2.

I am not happy  with this grade because i know i can do better and i know i didn't do my best in this research, however i am going to try hard to improve my level of research. 

My targets to improve my research are:

1. more in depth research

2. mention the contemporary situation about the topic 

3. do more research on the other topic