Tuesday, 23 October 2012

assignment #8 draft 3 self assessment



SELF ASSESSMENT
What went well…
  • good presentation skills
  • good points mentioned 
  • used pictures to back up points
Even better if…
  • be more specific on story board 
  • have more images to support your points 
  • have less text on each slide 
PEER ASSESSMENT
N/A 
TEACHER ASSESSMENT


GRADE
 The grade I received for this task was C/B
 This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE
To improve this work I need to: 
- use more resources for research 
-  have less text on each slide to make it easier for audience to read

assignment #8 draft 3

Below is my assignment #8 draft 3

Sunday, 21 October 2012

what i learnt from draft 2

The vlog below mentiones what i have learnt from the audience's feedback from draft 2

Friday, 19 October 2012

assignment #8 self assessment sheet


SELF ASSESSMENT


PEER ASSESSMENT
N/A
TEACHER ASSESSME







GRADE
 The grade I received for this task was -D3
 This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE
To improve this work I need to: 
-use more resources for research 
-use more pictures 
-make it more visual with use of graphs 

Monday, 15 October 2012

Sunday, 14 October 2012

what i learnt from draft 1

the vlog below includes what i have learnt by the audience's feedback from draft 1.

Tuesday, 2 October 2012

TEACHER ASSESSMENT OF RESEARCH (Individual Draft 2)


TEACHER ASSESSMENT OF RESEARCH (Individual Draft 2)

I have sat down with my teacher 1-to-1 and she gave me some feedback on the quality of my research of my chosen topics:

WWW
EBI

  • interesting points 
  • good facts about topic
  • mentioning the views of different countries (global) 









  • have equal amount of research for both topics 
  • use other research methods 
  •  don't base it too much on history 
  • mention changes 
  • how is this topic seen nowadays
  • basic information  



Overall, she gave me a grade of E2.  My target grade is D2.

I am not happy  with this grade because i know i can do better and i know i didn't do my best in this research, however i am going to try hard to improve my level of research. 

My targets to improve my research are:
1. more in depth research
2. mention the contemporary situation about the topic 
3. do more research on the other topic 

self assessment of resource checklist


Research resource checklist

Use this checklist to see if you have used a variety of resources for your research.  This is good for evaluation questions.

Y
N
Type of Resource
 x

Wikipedia
 x

articles on line
 x

newspaper and magazine articles
 x

youtube videos
 x

information from various textbooks

 x
periodicals (library)

 x
books (library or bought)

 x
vimeo videos

 x
TED videos
 x

slideshare presentations

 x
blogs

 x
social media such as twitter

 x
phone interview with expert
 x

in-person interview with public

 x
in-person interview with expert
 x

other:  leaflets
 x

other:  films


BELOW IDENTIFY RESOURCES YOU NEED TO EMBRACE FOR BETTER QUALITY RESEARCH



Type of resource
GREEN
I am confident with these resources and I am mostly using these


 Wikipedia, articles online, newspaper and magazine articles, youtube videos, public interviews, leaflets, films about topic 




AMBER
I may have used some of these resources but I need to do more with this because I have either used this before or know how to use it pretty well


 books, slideshare presentations, blogs, social media   





RED
I have not used this resources at all and need to try to use these


 interviews with experts, in person interview with expert,  TED videos, Vimeo videos, periodicals (library)






3 targets to improve my research will be:
1. use more book research such as periodicals 
2. have interviews with experts that may help my research
3. make better use of my time and complete work on time
4. research needs to be more of a wide range (ex. not just history based)