assignment #14 : Self assessment

SELF ASSESSMENT	What went well… show understanding  clearly set out  good editing  Even better if… use another picture to show the editing clearer  make photos bigger  have more annotations
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was C/D.   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  pay close attention to way pictures are set and make more annotations.

assignment #14: photography research and practice

The group presentation below includes both parts A and B as a prepation for our ancillary task.

Research and planning mark draft 1

The following screenshot is the teacher assessment for our research and planning for draft 1 of our documentary.

assignment #13: self assessment

SELF ASSESSMENT	What went well… good points good amount of research used different colours representing each group member  Even better if… used tables  make annotations clearer  do more research on the cost of different sized adverts
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was C/D.   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  make annotations clearer and research the different costs according to the advert sizes.

assignment #13: group ancillary research and analysis

Assignment #13 from mariayounes

assignment #12 part II self assessment

The following print screens are mu group's self assessment sheets to assignment #12 part II

SELF ASSESSMENT	What went well… good ideas  labeled with colours representing each group member  time management  Even better if… highlighted things that are going to be used for montage editing  set in a way that makes it easier to read  make presentation more consistent
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was C/D.   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  use better pictures that allows the editing i done to be more visible.

assignment #12: planning for our documentary part II

assignment #12 self assessment

Here is a print screen of the self assessment done for assignment #12 as a group. 

SELF ASSESSMENT
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was ------.   This is ------ my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  make presentation more consistent and graphs all the same size.

assignment #12 : planning for documenatry draft 1

The presentation below includes some of the planning for our documentary.

Meeting with Nicholas Lawrence

On tuesday 20/11/12 we had a meeting with Nicholas who works in an organisation in which specialises in youth trans gender. It was very helpful for our group to know more about the thoughts of this topic and the kind of things we could include in our documentary. We presented our assignment #10 which includes the research we have done so far on transgender people. Below are some notes that we took while he was giving us feedback about the research and his thoughts on the topic.

assignment #11 self assessment

SELF ASSESSMENT	What went well… -clearly colour coded -good points made  -mind maps were detailed  Even better if… - Use a variety of resources - explain more about the conventions - use the same way of presenatation throughout the whole presenation
PEER	N/A
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was C1.   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  - use more resources  - expand on conventions

assignment #11 similar products, conventions and channel time

The presentation below includes some of the conventions in documentaries and the channel and time our documentary is going to be in.

assignment #10 self assessment

SELF ASSESSMENT	What went well… good points good amount of research clearly set out Even better if… put more effort with the spider diagrams summarise in blluet points the oyutube videos divide work accurately between group members
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was C/D.   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  be less scientific on my reasearch and add more detalis to the spider diagrams.

assignment #10 group coursework presentation

The presentation below includes the exploring and possible topic ideas for our documentary.

Assignment 10 group assignment final draft from debbie14

assignment 9 : Self Assessment

SELF ASSESSMENT	What went well… good presentation skills clearly set out  used different colours to differentiate each member of the group  Even better if… had more information on the spider diagrams  divided research equally within the group  have more about the topics
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was ------.   This is ------ my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  - use more resources for research and divide the topics equally within the group members

assignment #9 : coming together as a group

The presentation below includes me and my group coming together.

assignment #8 draft 3 self assessment

SELF ASSESSMENT	What went well… good presentation skills good points mentioned  used pictures to back up points Even better if… be more specific on story board  have more images to support your points  have less text on each slide
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was C/B.   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  - use more resources for research  -  have less text on each slide to make it easier for audience to read

assignment #8 draft 3

Below is my assignment #8 draft 3

what i learnt from draft 2

The vlog below mentiones what i have learnt from the audience's feedback from draft 2

assignment #8 self assessment sheet

SELF ASSESSMENT
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSME
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was -D3.   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  -use more resources for research  -use more pictures  -make it more visual with use of graphs

assignment #8 draft 2

here is my assignment #8 presentation which includes research on btoh my final ideas.

assignment #8 interviews on children and media

the interviews below are about my topic to do with media's influence on children today.

assignment #8 interviews on abortion

The interviews below are about my topic called is abortion always wrong

what i learnt from draft 1

the vlog below includes what i have learnt by the audience's feedback from draft 1.

TEACHER ASSESSMENT OF RESEARCH (Individual Draft 2)

TEACHER ASSESSMENT OF RESEARCH (Individual Draft 2)

I have sat down with my teacher 1-to-1 and she gave me some feedback on the quality of my research of my chosen topics:

WWW	EBI
interesting points  good facts about topic mentioning the views of different countries (global)	have equal amount of research for both topics  use other research methods   don't base it too much on history  mention changes  how is this topic seen nowadays basic information

Overall, she gave me a grade of E2.  My target grade is D2.

I am not happy  with this grade because i know i can do better and i know i didn't do my best in this research, however i am going to try hard to improve my level of research. 

My targets to improve my research are:

1. more in depth research

2. mention the contemporary situation about the topic 

3. do more research on the other topic 

self assessment of resource checklist

Research resource checklist

Use this checklist to see if you have used a variety of resources for your research.  This is good for evaluation questions.

Y	N	Type of Resource
x		Wikipedia
x		articles on line
x		newspaper and magazine articles
x		youtube videos
x		information from various textbooks
	x	periodicals (library)
	x	books (library or bought)
	x	vimeo videos
	x	TED videos
x		slideshare presentations
	x	blogs
	x	social media such as twitter
	x	phone interview with expert
x		in-person interview with public
	x	in-person interview with expert
x		other:  leaflets
x		other:  films

BELOW IDENTIFY RESOURCES YOU NEED TO EMBRACE FOR BETTER QUALITY RESEARCH

		Type of resource
GREEN	I am confident with these resources and I am mostly using these	Wikipedia, articles online, newspaper and magazine articles, youtube videos, public interviews, leaflets, films about topic
AMBER	I may have used some of these resources but I need to do more with this because I have either used this before or know how to use it pretty well	books, slideshare presentations, blogs, social media
RED	I have not used this resources at all and need to try to use these	interviews with experts, in person interview with expert,  TED videos, Vimeo videos, periodicals (library)

3 targets to improve my research will be:

1. use more book research such as periodicals 

2. have interviews with experts that may help my research

3. make better use of my time and complete work on time

4. research needs to be more of a wide range (ex. not just history based)