What to change for next draft

Group 2 Ancillary Task Draft 4

The following pictures are print screens of the PDF files of our Ancillary Task Draft 4

Group 2 Documenatry Draft 3 Assessment Records

 

SELF ASSESSMENT
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was D2.   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  - have less of the getting ready footage  -pay close attention to sound  - have more establishing shots

Group 2 documenatry Draft 3

The following video is our documentary draft 3.

Filming for Draft 3

The following pictures are of us filming outside for the interviews.

Kauana getting ready to intervew 

Luara getting camera ready to film kauana interviewing person's reaction when seeing me.

Luara and Kauana filming Maria 

Luara and Maria Filming interviews

me being filmed at park for interviews 

Group Meeting

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Group 2 Ancillary Taks draft 3 Assessment records

SELF ASSESSMENT
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was  D3.   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  - better quality picture  -have a more creative title/subtitle  - use more conventions from real media resources

Group 2 Ancillary task draft 3

The following pictures are print scrrens of the PDF files of our Ancillary Task Draft 3.

Inspirational Bill Board

On my way to school today i went past a very interesting bill board and found it quite inspirational for my group's ancillary task as it is from channel 4 and is advertising a documentary. I took a picture which is shown below.