Group 2 Ancillary Task draft 2 Assessment Records

SELF ASSESSMENT
PEER ASSESSMENT
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was     .   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  - use more examples from real newspaper ads and double page spreads  - find a better title/ subtitle  - have better quality pictures  -pay close attention to mise-en-scene

Group 2 Ancillary task draft 2

The following pictures are print screens of our Ancillary task draft 2 as PDF file.

Group 2 documentary draft 2 assessment records

SELF ASSESSMENT
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was D3 .   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to: - pay close attention to sound - be more successful with mise-en-scene  - edit interviews in a more creative way

Group 2 Documentary draft 2

The following video is my documentary draft 2.

Filming Pictures for draft 2

The follwing ictures were taken during our filming for draft 2.

Me and Luara Filming at soho square 

Kauana getting ready to present 

at soho square Maria Giving opinion to Luara about framing 

Kauana waiting to start presenting at soho square 

Luara filming at soho square

Group 2 Ancillary Task draft 1 assessment records

SELF ASSESSMENT
PEER ASSESSMENT
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was U.   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  - better quality pictures  - have more inspiration  - make it smaller size  - follow hierarchy structure  - make topic more obvious

Ancillary Task draft 1

This is our group's Ancillary Task draft 1

Group 2 documentary draft 1 assessment records

SELF ASSESSMENT
PEER ASSESSMENT
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was E3.   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  -get better footage -sound has to improve  - pay attention to the structure of the documentary  -make it more original and captivating  - be more basic on the terms used at the beginning

Group 2 Documentary Draft 1

The following video is the first draft of our documentary.

InDesign Tutorial

The presentation below includes my own tutorial of how to use Adobe InDesign. It explains the name of each button and what it is used for by the use of examples.

Twlight Double Page Spread

The following picture is a print screen of my version of the Twlight double page spread, already converted into a PDF file.

Indesign Twlight Tutorial

The following presentation involves a step by step of how I created the Twilight double page spread.

In design tutorial from debbie14

Improving my research and planning grade

The picture below includes the changes i am going to make to my assignments in order to improve my research and planning grade.

Group Editing Schedule

The following picture is a print screen of our group editing schedule.

Pictures of Group Editing (draft 1)

Here are some pictures of the group editing the documentary and the ancillary.

Luara and Maria Editing double page spread 

Me and Kauana editing documentary 

editing for first draft of documentary 

Me and Kauana editing documentary on imovie 

Kauana Editing on imovie 

assignment 16 : self assessment

SELF ASSESSMENT	What went well… good picture ideas  relates to topic  clearly presented Even better if… take more pictures  have better quality pictures  took more time with editing
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
TEACHER ASSESSMENT
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was C/D.   This is below my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  take better quality pictures and have a bigger variety.

assignment 16: ancillary planning

The following group presentation includes ideas and pictures that were are going to use for our ancillary task.

Group 2 Meeting Log

The following dates are the dates we are going to have group meetings and arrange the planning for our ancillary task and documentary.

assignment 15: ancillary research self assessment

SELF ASSESSMENT	What went well… good choice of pictures   all relate to topic  gave our group inspiration for ancillary   Even better if… made another one with different  pictures  took some of the pictures myself  put together the mood board of everyone in the group
PEER ASSESSMENT	N/A
GRADE	The grade I received for this task was E/D.   This isbelow my target grade of a A.
TARGETS TO IMPROVE	To improve this work I need to:  use better quality pictures and make it more original

assignment 15: ancillary inspiration

The following picture is the mood board that i done including related pictures to our topic Transsexualism.

Mood board from luarapires